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The best gift from the God to us is "Feelings". Every living being on this planet is having a Heart and five senses for feeling! And By the means of this Blog, I would like to express my feelings and share my experiences.

Saturday, February 02, 2008

Always Close to My Heart...


Wen i started wid d poem...i had no words 4 her as words cant describe her....but somehow i managed 2 write d imagination on a paper...Finally a reader helped me out 2 get a perfect title(Thanx 2 that person...)

This one is dedicated to a very special friend....cheers to her!


In the Darkness of the beautiful night,
When no one was visible, everyone was out-of sight,
I was walking alone on the sea-shore,
I remembered her, smiled, I was alone no more.

Bare-footed, we walked on the moist sand,
We kept on walking with her hand in my hand…
The painful pores of my heart were getting healed,
My heart was beating faster and mind was sealed.

Words, came out of her mouth, like a water-splash,
Her voice, Smile and Laughter paralyzed my mind and heart became a trash.
Yeah! She is cute, she is innocent and very simple,
I was about to fall in trench like deep dimple.

Wind teased her, by playing with her long, curly hair,
I wished that it was not a heart-breaking Nightmare.
In the moonlight, her rose-like cheeks gleamed,
It could be seen, that the two souls, were really seamed!

I looked into her oceanic-deep eyes,
Bluish, as if, stolen color of skies,
Unable to hide anything, always revealing the hidden truth,
I could see the pain, for which I am feeling ruth.

Because of princess-like beauty and flower-like smile,
She pretends to be cold, calm, gratified and mentally agile.
Thus, she always tries to hide her problems and pain,
Why doesn’t she understand, her depression makes me insane?

Her heart, very soft, kind and innocent, is like that of a pup’s,
Her remembrance, in my mind, will be surely giving her hiccups.
Oh! Her smell! She smells like a new and fresh flower,
Dear! Keep smiling; your cute smile is source of energy & power.

I remember, she gave me her pure, cottony and soft hand…
I promise, when she is in trouble, ahead of her, always, I will stand.
She helped me, when I needed the most and I was all alone…
For her, I swear, I will be there forever, no matter, even if she is gone!

9 Comments:

Blogger freesherry said...

wow
lovely poem..
you have a way with words and a great imagination
have blogrolled you
tc

9:34 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

nice one bro !!
ur imagination has reached the new heights ..srry even i cud'nt able to think about the topic of poem...some poems needs to define by itself not by a topic ..

8:51 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful poem..simply wonderful!!!

1:31 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

u r nt able 2 thnk f a title bt m sure dis poem is realy close 2 ur heart..so "close 2 my heart" cud b d title..coz dis person as wel as d poem is close 2 ur heart...n its a short n simple title bt tels a lot f things!

7:15 AM  
Blogger Sameer Jain said...

@ anonymous...

1st of all thanx 4 reading the poem..
n thanx 4 ur comment n lovely suggestion...
but it wud hv been better if u diclosed ur name...u can do that personally also...
newaz thanx 4 helping me!

10:21 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey u r most welcome!no need 2 thank me..ur poem made me think so deeply!thanx 2 ur poems..i simply adore ur poems!!keep writin lik dis...n ya thnx 2 u 4 approvin my suggestion f d title..God bless u:)

8:03 AM  
Blogger Sameer Jain said...

@ anonymous...

no need 2 b so formal...
n thanx 4 liking the poems...
n again telling u the same thing...u shud hv disclosed ur identity...c'mon...this is an open forum..if u wish u can do that in person...
cheers!

10:02 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

cheers!!!

10:08 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

dis is juhi here..identity disclosed!

12:48 PM  

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